Funky Monkey!
There once was a Monkey,
He was very Funky.
He lived in a tree,
And he lived very free.
He had a friend Amanda,
Who was a big fat Panda.
They lived in a big Hutch,
But they didn’t talk very much.
They had all they need,
They could have a feast or shall i say a big feed.
As you can see they are the most amazing friends of all,
And what they love to do best is have a big ball.
They have all their gowns that they had found,
They found them by the dumpstaron the ground.
They dance all night until there shoes are worn out,
But they always keep a pair of shoes in there bag no doubt about.
You see there best of friends you know,
But there always dancing on there 10 toes.
By Darianne
Nadine said,
October 8, 2008 @ 3:35 pm
Hi Darianne
Nice Poem! I like the humour in it, and how you talk about 10 toes, talking animals. It is very creative!!
Plus, I couldn’t take my eyes off it! You are very imaginative when it comes to poems Darianne.
Keep writing and Stay in Touch
Nadine
Darianne said,
October 9, 2008 @ 10:23 am
Hi Nadine,
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and today it is warm. It has been like this for ages.
Hope to keep in touch Bye From Darianne 
Thanks for the wonderful comment I didn’t think I was that good at poems but hey now I know that right
How is the weather over there? It is very on and off over here yesterday it was frezzing
Doing much work at school latley. We are we are doing a fair bit and some of it is some of it is easy and some is mediume.
Cointha said,
October 11, 2008 @ 4:04 pm
Ha ha!
Funny.
I like your poem Darianne! It’s rather cute!
You have a lot of hits! And your Clustrmap is going really well!
See you on Monday!
Bye!
Nadine said,
November 3, 2008 @ 2:38 am
Hi Darianne
Thanks for replying!!
I’m glad you like my comment. I think you are great at poems… that’s for sure. You should keep writing them!
The weather in Sydney is actually pretty warm! I love it… it was 28 degrees in the afternoon but now it is about 23 or so. What I don’t like about Spring is that it is cold one day and hot the next! Don’t you think?
At school I think it is alright, my class will have to do an item or act in front of the school on Friday, we haven’t planned anything! I am SO NERVOUS!
Good luck at school, try your best!
Stay in Touch
~Nadine~
kayla said,
November 19, 2008 @ 12:24 am
Yes indeed nadine is right you are good at writing poems keep up the hard work and keep writing.